My Lasting Vow


I cannot imagine tomorrow
Not unless you let me follow
I don't wanna live in sorrow
Without you I will be hollow

Trap me within your glow
And love shall forever flow
Take us to the lover's meadow
And the flowers be our pillow

Stay so I will not wallow
Dream with me 'neath the rainbow
Seeds of love together we will sow
Field of affection I shall plow

A life time is so short, I know
Mortal's life so slim and narrow
But a grain of life I shall borrow
Let this poem be my final throw

9 Responses to "My Lasting Vow"

  1. well written...nice poems. looking for more such poems.
    thanks for adding me to friend connect.

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  2. Thanks Rahul, such kind words make me more inspired to compose better poems.

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  3. A good perspective on the life and nice metaphors as well as the rythm in the rhyming scheme.Keep up the good work!

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  4. Thanks Matt,

    You have just made my heart swell
    And you consequently replenished my soul.

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  5. A very nice flowing poem. The rhymes feel natural and rhythm works well.

    Nice work!

    Lauren

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  6. Thanks lauren, coming from a writer like you it's sweetier. I'm trying to claim my brain you know..lol.

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  7. Beautifully said ....

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  8. Thanks Meam.. such a short comment left a huge impact on me.

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