I cannot imagine tomorrow
Not unless you let me follow
I don't wanna live in sorrow
Without you I will be hollow
Trap me within your glow
And love shall forever flow
Take us to the lover's meadow
And the flowers be our pillow
Stay so I will not wallow
Dream with me 'neath the rainbow
Seeds of love together we will sow
Field of affection I shall plow
A life time is so short, I know
Mortal's life so slim and narrow
But a grain of life I shall borrow
Let this poem be my final throw
well written...nice poems. looking for more such poems.
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Thanks Rahul, such kind words make me more inspired to compose better poems.
ReplyDeleteA good perspective on the life and nice metaphors as well as the rythm in the rhyming scheme.Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Matt,
ReplyDeleteYou have just made my heart swell
And you consequently replenished my soul.
A very nice flowing poem. The rhymes feel natural and rhythm works well.
ReplyDeleteNice work!
Lauren
Thanks lauren, coming from a writer like you it's sweetier. I'm trying to claim my brain you know..lol.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully said ....
ReplyDeleteThanks Meam.. such a short comment left a huge impact on me.
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