Feel me,
Let emotions flow
Breathe with me,
As we play amid snow
Take me,
Where the birds sing
Climb with me,
Lovely hills, blossoming
Kiss me,
Under the morning sun
Run with me,
And cruise the golden land
Hold me,
Neath the brown trees
Embrace me,
We’ll watch, falling leaves
Let emotions flow
Breathe with me,
As we play amid snow
Take me,
Where the birds sing
Climb with me,
Lovely hills, blossoming
Kiss me,
Under the morning sun
Run with me,
And cruise the golden land
Hold me,
Neath the brown trees
Embrace me,
We’ll watch, falling leaves
I like this poem very much. It's very fluent and sensitive.And very tender and delicate too.
ReplyDeleteThis is your best yet. It is full of imagery with a free flowing style and reminds me of the great 19th century traditionalists. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteNow I am lost for metaphors to express how much your comments mean to me.
ReplyDeleteI am beginning to be bored with forms that's why I came up with this.