Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Accompanied only by a clock
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Deafening silence that mocks
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
On the bed perfectly tucked
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Waiting for you to comeback
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Anticipating for your knock
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Almost dawn, still no luck
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Time have flown, I’m still stuck
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
It’s been a year since our last smack
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Until finally reality struck
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
You’ll never coming back
Hi RS .. that's sad .. but a deafening story of waiting and then that sorrow .. thank you .. Hilary
ReplyDeleteWaiting for someone just for an hour is like hell, much more for a year or more.
ReplyDeleteThis is striking and sad,
ReplyDeletelove your playful words.
A++
its nice how you use the ticking to realize the story rs? nice and thank you for sharing.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/19/my-whole-world/
ReplyDeleteThe poetry was nice, but the story was sad.
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