Time to Let Go


Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Accompanied only by a clock
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Deafening silence that mocks

Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
On the bed perfectly tucked
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Waiting for you to comeback

Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Anticipating for your knock
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Almost dawn, still no luck

Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Time have flown, I’m still stuck
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
It’s been a year since our last smack

Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
Until finally reality struck
Tic-tac, tic-tac, tic-tac
You’ll never coming back

Comments

  1. Hi RS .. that's sad .. but a deafening story of waiting and then that sorrow .. thank you .. Hilary

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  2. Waiting for someone just for an hour is like hell, much more for a year or more.

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  3. This is striking and sad,
    love your playful words.
    A++

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  4. Anonymous19:19

    its nice how you use the ticking to realize the story rs? nice and thank you for sharing.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/19/my-whole-world/

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  5. Anonymous01:31

    The poetry was nice, but the story was sad.

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