Free Spirit

Once I did not care
Not minding what clothes to wear
Once I did not swear
Not even noticing what I bear

Reckless, my younger years
Doing crazy things without fears
Selfish, my younger years
Bullying kids with friends' cheers

Gone are all the days
When rainbow we race to chase
Gone are all the smiles
When we watched the sun's blazes

Now maturity came to be
From a different perspective things I see
Now everything's new to me
Even the place where I used to live

**BACK THEN I WISHED I AM OLDER
NOW I'M WISHING I COULD GO BACK**

7 Responses to "Free Spirit"

  1. Nice work - proves that I was right never to repeat my poetry attempt, there are good reasons why I stopped.

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  2. Thanks Glen, but don't stop, I saw some of your poems and they are good that's why I am following your blog.

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  3. I've enjoyed reading over your poems. I'll definitely be back to read more!

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  4. Thanks Gabby, I really appreciate it..now I am motivated.

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  5. Hi!truly love this one.reflects my own thoughts.thank you for commenting on my work,too.still have trouble getting my thoughts into form but learning everyday.

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  6. Hi,.truly love this one.reflects my own thoughts.still have trouble turning my thoughts into form,but i'm learning everyday.and i'm thankful for people like you who takes time to read my works.thank you so much!

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  7. hi!truly love this one.reflects my own thoughts.still have trouble forming my thoughts but i'm glad for people like you who take time to read my works.thank you so much!

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