Journey of Life Poem

Weights that I carry
Through years of agony
About to end finally

A new window of hope
Bridges between the gaps
The unknown and the past

I will dare lose my doubts
And should I need to forget
To find the right rough path

A leaf of life has fallen
Comes a new, better one
Nourish it, for it to bloom

Avenues of the future
Promise of new adventures
With touch of sweet tortures

Float, the dawn has come
Pack your spirit with dreams
Sail away with optimism

A new journey has begun…

12 Responses to "Journey of Life Poem"

  1. I just see a glitter of light in your vision. I wish it to increase and become total. And first of all I wish you inspiration in everithing you'll do from now on.

  2. I am definitely optimistic this 2010 Silvia for I have shed my pessimistic skin as 2009 ended. a good year for all of us.

  3. Anonymous01:46

    Today is my daughter's 20th b-day. I gave her up for adoption 19 yrs ago. We finally connected last Feb. Her anymosity towards me, you could cut with a sword.Found your poem & it magically fit to what she & I are going through, so I thank you & your creative God inside. Namaste'! Sophia

  4. Sophia that's the best compliment I've ever had. I wish you and your daughter good luck.

    No matter how hard it would be for both of you, I know you can sail away together somehow.

  5. this poem is very beautiful written. i like this very much! keep inspiring there! cheers. stay in touch.

  6. Thanks Dolph, I am glad that my words can inspire.

  7. Ronald,
    I read this poem and just loved the optimism which flowed from your words.
    An uplifting poem in these times of gloom!

    Best wishes, Eileen

  8. true words.
    happiness and sadness combine ...

    Thanks for sharing!


  9. lovely.. here’s mine for this new year potluck..

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  11. Moving first thought that came to mind after reading it. A new journey is always exciting, a build up of anticipation!

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