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The Girl with a Broken Heart
Just yesterday you were so happy
Waved your hand, said hello to me
Heard you giggling with your friends
You were so pretty dressed in green
This morning, I waved and said hi
You’ve looked at me with those teary eyes
A letter in your hand drenched in tears
I wanted to hold you and tell you I care
In the evening you were on the porch
Staring, lonely sitting on the couch
As if you are waiting for that familiar car
But no one, nothing came until you retire
Next morning you’re nowhere to be found
I’ve looked for you, drove my car around
There you were standing on the beach
The other side you are trying to reach
I've seen enough, I couldn't just watch
Parked the car, unlocked the belt's latch
Ran as fast as I could, hugged you from behind
Slowly kneeling, both of us crying on the sand
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This tugged at my heart, very deeply.
ReplyDeleteRonald,
ReplyDeleteA very emotional story unfolding.
A realistic life situation.
Best,
Eileen
hhh brokent heart always made us sad n crying...
ReplyDelete...it portrays a typical love story with a not so happy ending... the anthology of emotions and the manner of narration made this poem truly appealing... i simply loved it!:)
ReplyDeleteTake care!
>kelvin
Thank you guys, just make the ending happier, or probably I should make it on the next post.
ReplyDeleteI love how the emotions are so intense here.
ReplyDeletei like this poem very visual check out my poems on love www.gabriellamattis.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you at potluck..
ReplyDeletelovely descriptions on emotions and more.
The moments unspoken of a newly broken heart, til 'both of us cryong on the sand'... the total embrace of the truest of friends.
ReplyDeletelove thie images you painted.. nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up with potluck..
ReplyDeleteyour image demonstrated the broken heart girl beautifully.
Dear Mallari
ReplyDeleteSweet and simple.. I liked this one.. thanks
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great poem. good use of language and imagery. nice job!
ReplyDeletethanks for linking up with potluck.
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award/treats for you. smiles.
I enjoyed the way you built suspense throughout the poem to climax at the end. This is a very emotional poem.
ReplyDeletevery touching
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