When an Angel Falls (Heartbreak Poem)

When the sea no longer kisses the shore
And thunders from above begin to roar
Rain of blood of a broken-hearted will pour
Sand-Castles will tremble until no more

Promises of evergreen, lover’s meadow
Becomes a cold and dark pool of sorrows
Flowers will wither, pound by the bitter snow
Dry trees shall fall crushing the soil below

Emptiness has crawled, shattered dreams
An angel has fallen; a demon rises from the realm
Darkness is victorious and got its claim
Consumed by hatred, soon nothing but mayhem

The fallen that used to be a dream weaver
Armed with a dark heart, now comes a destroyer
Venom in hand, it will make someone suffer
The search has begun, heart-breakers beware

5 Responses to "When an Angel Falls (Heartbreak Poem)"

  1. Brrr!What a gloomy scenery!Why are you always so sad ?! The world has its good things, hasn't it ? Anyway, as a poem is good, but gives me thrills !

  2. Just mixing things up a bit...some are happy, some are sad and some are inspired.:D

  3. Anonymous20:38

    it's really a good poem it made me to capture the sorrows and feeling umm lovely scenery!!! :)

  4. Anonymous20:40

    its really a good poem it made me capture the sorrows and the sad feelings + the imagery was good!!! loved it :)

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